古代的雨 发表于 2006-6-26 18:59:57

[原创] 目光也是一道门

<h1 style="MARGIN: 11pt 0cm; TEXT-INDENT: 22.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font size="3" style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #e5e5e5;">&nbsp;</font></span><a name="_Toc29201175"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial;"><font size="3" style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #e5e5e5;">目光也是一道门</font></span></a></h1><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span lang="EN-US"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">那天下午</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">我们一起走出家门</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">门被忧虑支撑着</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">没有关上</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">我们走在大街上</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">人们的目光</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">议论纷纷</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">开始</span><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp; </font></span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">我有些胆怯</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">但想返回已没有退路</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">背着纸笔、画夹或相机</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">感觉</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">走不出的永远只是自已</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">晚霞的佘辉</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">夹着荆剌斟满脚印</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">有一天</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">人们的目光</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">竟变成惊喜</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">我才知道</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">目光也是一道门</span></p>

郭良子 发表于 2006-6-30 17:59:06

思想深刻，耐人寻味！

枫之伤 发表于 2006-6-30 18:05:28

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">有一天</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">人们的目光</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">竟变成惊喜</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">我才知道</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">目光也是一道门</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">很有深度的结尾！</span></p>

妍萍 发表于 2006-7-5 11:31:59

<p>这目光更象是父母殷切的期待，我只能、必须努力着。。。。。。</p>

妍萍 发表于 2006-7-5 11:33:58

这首诗真的很耐读，喜欢，学习。。。。。。
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