古代的雨 发表于 2006-6-26 19:01:34

[原创] 母亲

<h1 style="MARGIN: 11pt 0cm; TEXT-INDENT: 22.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font size="3" style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #e5e5e5;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </font></span></span><a name="_Toc29201177"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial;"><font size="3" style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #e5e5e5;">母亲</font></span></a></h1><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span lang="EN-US"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">炊烟在我手里</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">点燃晨昏的日子</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">母亲</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">就一直站在村口</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">看我</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">看我和我的家庭</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">走过的路</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span lang="EN-US"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">风雨</span><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp; </font></span></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">愁白</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">母亲黑发的思念</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">尤如家圆的灯光</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">远远近近</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">点亮我</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">曲曲折折的艰辛</span></p>

秦之韵 发表于 2006-6-27 12:27:08

小巧、灵动、真挚，好！

贺乔 发表于 2006-6-27 20:57:38

挚！

夭夭 发表于 2006-6-27 22:33:42

真挚的感情,干净的语言!

古代的雨 发表于 2006-7-3 19:34:04

<font size="4">感谢各位的点评！</font>

妍萍 发表于 2006-7-3 21:58:52

我感觉这个不如第一首好，不过看了母亲二字，脑子里马上就浮现出了老娘泪里那个感人至深的母亲，望多写一些这样亲情的诗歌，学习中~
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