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秦之韵 发表于 2006-6-28 20:25:50

[原创]战争的消息

<p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><strong><font size="3">战争的消息</font></strong></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;"><p></p></span>&nbsp;</p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">★</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><font face="Times New Roman"> </font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">王光育</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">打开战争的窗户</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">火药味扑鼻而来</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">一只被雨淋湿的</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 92.35pt; mso-char-indent-count: 9.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">翼翅</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">挂在树梢</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">让四面的风</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">吹得丁当作响</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">以死做赌注</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">赢得胜利的人们</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">把弹头洞穿的姿势</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">想象得极其优美</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">钢铁和肉体碰撞的</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 92.35pt; mso-char-indent-count: 9.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">声音</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">是一曲动听的音乐</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">在战争炽热时候</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">嘹亮唱响</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">所以，不管是庆功会</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">　或是追悼会</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">都有同一种语调</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">总结战争</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">另一只翼翅</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">始终固守沉默</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">在阳光灿烂的日子</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">抖动羽毛</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">扇开所有气味</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">很自然地在蓝天</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 92.35pt; mso-char-indent-count: 9.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">白云之间静游</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">一切与战争无关的</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 92.35pt; mso-char-indent-count: 9.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">声音</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">也因羽毛的煽动</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">深入得极其遥远</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">松动的窗棂</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">盛开的玻璃花</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">干枯成标本</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">在人们的视野以外</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 82.1pt; mso-char-indent-count: 8.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">静伫如绝世风景</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p>

琴语 发表于 2006-6-28 23:01:31

用叙述的方式写诗,也是一种风格.王主编类似于这种风格的诗歌我还是第一次读,感觉不错的.

江河源 发表于 2006-6-29 07:55:06

<p>把死的写活了，把活的写动了，把动的写美了</p><p>诗歌的意象将战争的消息刻画的如此沉稳</p><p>也许这就是我们常说的写诗歌的“魂魄”所在。</p><p>王主编的网上对抗、炮群等等都非常的美。欢迎领导的大作</p><p>但是一定要再接再历啊！！</p>

秦之韵 发表于 2006-6-29 12:30:55

谢谢琴姐姐关照，我向来写诗都这个样子的，写诗各有各的写法，百家争鸣！姐姐的散文诗写得很独到的，应该多向你学习才是！

秦之韵 发表于 2006-6-29 12:35:31

谢谢江编辑的鼓励，一定努力！

温州阿宝 发表于 2006-7-3 08:06:56

王大哥，还得继续努力多创佳作啊！！！

秦之韵 发表于 2006-7-11 22:01:42

是呀,百日竿头,不努力是不行的呀,谢谢宝兄弟的鼓励!

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