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李黑 发表于 2006-5-19 09:40:02

等你(二首)

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 44pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0; mso-char-indent-size: 22.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">等</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 黑体;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;&nbsp; </font></span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">你</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 黑体;"><font face="Times New Roman"> <p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 134.4pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; mso-char-indent-count: 8.4; mso-char-indent-size: 16.0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">总希望你</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">踏着我渴盼的目光</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">突然叩响我的门</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">把手同微笑伸进屋</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">总在想</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">秋雨绵绵的清晨</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">你在窗外轻呼一声</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">把等你的不安</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">一把拧出一盆水</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">然后把淋成水人儿的你</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">相拥着等雨过等天晴</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 134.4pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; mso-char-indent-count: 8.4; mso-char-indent-size: 16.0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;<p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">没人来理解我</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">等你的那种心境</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">唯有淅沥不停的秋雨</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">懂了我等你的缠长</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">懂了我等你的忧伤</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><p></p></span></p><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;"><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 31.7pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; mso-char-indent-count: 1.76; mso-char-indent-size: 18.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">风中的云</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 黑体;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 134.4pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; mso-char-indent-count: 8.4; mso-char-indent-size: 16.0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><font face="Times New Roman"><p></p></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">假如你是一朵</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">娇柔的云</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">那么我是一股</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">浓烈的风</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">将你吹卷进我的心</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 仿宋_GB2312;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">层层裹起</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">邮编:674300</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">通联:云南宁蒗县财政局李黑</span>&nbsp;<p></p></p></span><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: 125.25pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">&nbsp;</span></p>

秦之韵 发表于 2006-5-19 10:08:47

新朋友，新作品，读来让人耳目一新，特别喜欢第一首，欣赏了。

千山鸿 发表于 2006-5-19 20:58:01

一缕忧伤萦绕心头.欢迎常来:)

琴语 发表于 2006-5-20 11:48:10

欢迎李黑朋友光临！<br/><br/>诗歌情感饱满，但语言上还可再做打磨。

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