香祖儿 发表于 2006-5-30 22:15:56

[原创]鸟对准了枪口

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 方正姚体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">鸟对准了枪口</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 方正姚体;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt;">文<span lang="EN-US">/香祖儿<p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">鸟对准了枪口</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">在羽翼脱落之后</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">高昂着头</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">注视着密林深处</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">隐藏的枪口</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">料定</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">在劫难逃</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">之后</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">她内心涌出一股巨大的冲动</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">准备一场未完的撕杀</span></p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">突然“砰”的一声</span></p></span>

香祖儿 发表于 2006-5-31 10:12:55

<p>感谢宝贵意见！</p>

秦之韵 发表于 2006-5-31 18:33:35

读着很有意思，让人难以尽兴！

香祖儿 发表于 2006-5-31 20:48:07

秦主编多提宝贵意见!

郭良子 发表于 2006-5-31 21:29:53

表达很有力度！个别句子需斟酌！问好！

香祖儿 发表于 2006-6-1 15:37:45

谢谢良子,问好!

千山鸿 发表于 2006-6-2 18:35:33

留下深思~~

香祖儿 发表于 2006-6-2 20:04:11

<strong><font face="Verdana" color="#da2549">问好千山鸿!</font></strong>
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