蓝郁 发表于 2006-12-15 10:20:35

游鱼细细

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'"><br />一条&nbsp; 两条&nbsp; 三条</span><span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">……</font></span></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'"><font size="3">我数的是玻璃鱼缸里那些死去的</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'"><font size="3">鱼&nbsp; 陆陆续续&nbsp; 有一些新鱼加入进来</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'"><font size="3">它们不争不闹&nbsp; 各自吐着自己的泡泡</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'"><font size="3">这个冬天&nbsp; 往来熙攘的鱼</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'"><font size="3">被一只暖和和的大手</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'"><font size="3">捧进来&nbsp; 又捞出去。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'"><font size="3">期间&nbsp; 我见过红色&nbsp; 黑色&nbsp; 青色&nbsp; 各色相间说不清颜色的</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'"><font size="3">金鱼&nbsp; 鲤鱼&nbsp; 鲫鱼&nbsp; 孔雀鱼&nbsp; 叫不出名字的鱼</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'"><font size="3">这些色彩艳丽的鱼们</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'"><font size="3">攸忽的影子汇成季节深处的风景&nbsp; </font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'"><font size="3">我注意到</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'"><font size="3">其中一条鱼躲过了一次次的更新&nbsp; </font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'"><font size="3">长时间活了下来</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'"><font size="3">那是一尾青色鲫鱼，</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'"><font size="3">最初它鲜艳而丰盈</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'"><font size="3">如今&nbsp; 它</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'"><font size="3">瘦成了一块薄薄的刀片</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'"><font size="3">每次它游过来&nbsp; 都会割伤我的眼睛</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'"><font size="3"></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'"><font size="3"></font></span></p>

楼兰 发表于 2006-12-15 17:13:28

楼主,你怎不好好喂养看管好你的鱼呢/

骆中 发表于 2006-12-15 17:30:31

如今它瘦成了一块薄薄的刀片

每次它游过来都会割伤我的眼睛

很有质地感.

梅影三叠 发表于 2006-12-15 17:45:16

结尾很妙，前面的铺排到位！

暖玉生烟 发表于 2006-12-15 20:25:32

纯粹的特写哈!问好蓝郁~~~

lxping 发表于 2006-12-15 21:40:42

心存怜悯,那是真正的爱心.欣赏楼主的敏感.

棠棣 发表于 2006-12-15 21:50:07

悲悯情怀.耐回味,问好蓝郁

星月诗魂 发表于 2006-12-15 22:22:06

细腻，寓意深刻。

蓝郁 发表于 2006-12-16 15:45:10

<p>引用第1楼楼兰于2006-12-15 17:13发表的: 楼主,你怎不好好喂养看管好你的鱼呢/ </p><p>天冷了，鱼想家了。：）</p><p>问候楼兰~`</p><p />

蓝郁 发表于 2006-12-16 15:47:45

<p>引用第2楼骆中于2006-12-15 17:30发表的: 如今 它瘦成了一块薄薄的刀片 每次它游过来 都会割伤我的眼睛 很有质地感&#46; </p><p>谢骆中。看到你在绿风的好成绩，为你开心。：）</p>
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