自度曲.渡春光 (原韵和暗香)
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><strong><span class="tpctitle1"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana"></span></span></strong></p><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">地也宽，海亦宽，莫把春光等闲看。桥也宽，路更宽，欲揽鲲鹏白云间。应赞这，情丝永结真诚里，再回眸，戏水鸳鸯同池伴。 轻轻唤，唤不尽前世姻缘。痴痴念，念不完幸福娇颜。问此生，连理悠悠魅红烛，月老贺，喜泪<span class="tpccontent1"><span style="mso-bidi-font-size: 14.0pt; mso-ansi-font-size: 14.0pt">儿、赠君一半。</span></span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA"><br style="mso-special-character: line-break" /><br style="mso-special-character: line-break" /></span></b> 和得很美。欣赏。谢智发。 和得好。尤其是赞智发词中的那份乐。赏了，问好智发！ <p>引用第1楼暗香如沁于2007-01-14 15:24发表的: 和得很美。欣赏。谢智发。 </p><p>愿暗香好心情.问好.</p><p /> <p>引用第2楼楼兰于2007-01-14 21:12发表的: 和得好。尤其是赞智发词中的那份乐。赏了，问好智发！ </p><p>谢楼版欣赏.问好.</p> 智发的诗作积极向上。欣赏。 <p>引用第4楼智发于2007-01-14 22:26发表的: 谢楼版欣赏.问好. </p><p>多交流.共进步.振游坛.问好.</p> 连理悠悠魅红烛，月老贺，喜泪儿、赠君一半。
欣赏了!问好. 谢猫猫光临.问好. 呵呵真不错，跟暗香那个对比读来更有味道呢