戏说周郎
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'"> 戏说周郎</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 黑体"><p /></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 黑体"><font face="Times New Roman"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span><p /></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 96pt; mso-char-indent-count: 6.0"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"">占尽清丽挽香魂</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312"><p /></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 96pt; mso-char-indent-count: 6.0"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"">醉倚玉莲有知音</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312"><p /></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 96pt; mso-char-indent-count: 6.0"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"">弦崩羽箭沙前月</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312"><p /></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 96pt; mso-char-indent-count: 6.0"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"">剑断鞍桥马后云</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312"><p /></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 96pt; mso-char-indent-count: 6.0"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"">泪染管弦轻生死</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312"><p /></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 96pt; mso-char-indent-count: 6.0"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"">人走翰墨透衣襟</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312"><p /></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 96pt; mso-char-indent-count: 6.0"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"">千古贤愚有公瑾</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312"><p /></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 96pt; mso-char-indent-count: 6.0"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: "Times New Roman"">谁可与之共浮沉</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312"><p /></span></p> 对仗工整，意境美。如按七律。律上斟酌。问好。欢迎常来。哪里是戏说,分明是感怀嘛.呵呵~~~,起句结句甚好.很好的一篇古风啊!
引用第0楼肖原于2007-02-07 09:09发表的:
戏说周郎 占尽清丽挽香魂醉倚玉莲有知音弦崩羽箭沙前月剑断鞍桥马后云泪染管弦轻生死人走翰墨透衣襟千古贤愚有公瑾谁可与之共浮沉 谢楼上二位阅读指教，神主人所言不差，问候二位 弦崩羽箭沙前月
剑断鞍桥马后云
不错~ 起联似不妥。个人比较欣赏第二联。很有意境。第三联的对仗稍显宽了些。整体还不错。 谢谢楼上各位指教，初学，多指正。到时候请各位喝酒，不会喝的上饮料—— 报告。我喝酒。 小二，等什么，给暗香如沁先生上酒——一定要上小店最好的酒，三碗不过岗的！ <p>引用第8楼肖原于2007-02-08 13:52发表的: 小二，等什么，给暗香如沁先生上酒——一定要上小店最好的酒，三碗不过岗的！ </p><p>暗香可是小姐啊/豪饮?</p>
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