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[原创]想念那片哀愁的叶子

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发表于 2006-8-4 22:34:52 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
                                           想念那片哀愁的叶子
                                  
                                        想写一首陶渊明时代的诗词
                                        送给亭亭净直的你
                                        这个城市的灰尘厚厚堆积
                                        喂养出鲜活丑陋的细菌
                                        蠕动到胃里  
                                        消化着青菜的肢体
                                        梦的火焰熄灭了
                                        热衷于睡眠的空洞
                                        喜好在阴雨绵绵之夜
                                        让手背或小腹绽放一朵粗俗的玫瑰
                                        然后写一首
                                        带着面具的诗句
                                         
                                          
                                        一个人徘徊
                                        想念那片哀愁的黄叶
                                        在另一条巷子上空飞旋
                                        它苍凉的泪水是我口中闪亮的语言
                                        日子匆促得枯败着七彩的花朵
                                        寒烟飘摇    残秋幽怨
                                        凄清的氛围浓浓淡淡
                                        它蜷曲在别人的大地上
                                        擦拭着自己的碑文
                                      
                                           
                                        一首诗歌的袖子缝补了一半
                                        另一半化作我的最爱
                                        来生再让痛苦成为甜蜜的衣裳
                                         
                                                                                                                                      
 
                                       
                                         
                                       
                  
                                       
                                       
发表于 2006-8-5 01:30:04 | 显示全部楼层
提读,明日细看,问候~~
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发表于 2006-8-6 13:13:57 | 显示全部楼层

看的不是太明白,

夭太笨,问好!


 

[此贴子已经被作者于2006-8-6 17:05:54编辑过]
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-8-6 16:54:31 | 显示全部楼层

   想到陶渊明,就想到菊花,自然想到“亭亭净直”。

  “美女编辑”笨还得了,愁得长出皱纹可就不好看了。噢?

   唉,只怪俺写得不好,笨。哈!

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